This is a draft of my Business Plan. Feedback on this draft, included;
- Cut down Summary
- Add detail to "Have experience teaching" on the slide labelled 'Current Status'
- Re-Word Values - Don't explain them to the audience. Say how you will implement them (values and vision = vision and mission statement)
- For service - discuss some example of experience (When Pitching)
- For market, you've talked broadly. Who, specifically is your target audience right now.
- Finance and Funding screens are a little blurry
- Cut Finance and Funding slides right down; you have good detail on your chart, talk more about it there and have only 1 more slide, if needed.
- Cut down all rule text - No more than 10 lines on ppt - don't make the text smaller.
- Add images throughout
- Can you design the slides to look more like your website?
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